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AN- EJ has come to my gallery! Enjoy it while it lasts!

"Hmm, maybe I should call him to make sure he's okay."
You were home alone on a Friday evening. Your best friend, Jack, hadn't been in school for the past week, and you were a bit worried. He was into the kind of stuff that worried you. What if he had hurt himself?
You picked up your cell phone and dialed his number.
"C'mon pick up!" you muttered as you waited for some sort of response either way.
"Hello?"
"Hey, it's (Name). Where were you the past few days?" you asked, recognizing the voice.
"I've been... Sick," Jack said.
"Well... Okay. I just wanted to make sure you were alright. Will you be back on Monday?"
"I don't know."
"I hope you are. Remember we have that test in Math that she's been annoying us about all month?"
"Yeah. I'll probably be back by Monday."
You sighed.
"Okay... Bye, Jack."
"Bye, (Name)."
You hung up, and grabbed the remote. Maybe you could find something good on for once.
After about two and a half hours, your older brother came home.
"Hey, have you been sitting here this whole time?" he asked.
"Yep. Go away," you said focusing your attention back on the movie you were watching.
He gave you a whack on the head and went upstairs.
"Should I start on dinner or... Nope," you chose to be lazy as you were pretty tired.
You continued to watch random movies, and fell asleep on the couch after a few hours.
***
When you woke up, the clock showed it was nearly two-thirty in the morning.
You turned off the TV and walked into the kitchen. You hadn't eaten any dinner, so you were pretty hungry.
"Sandwich," you muttered to yourself, making a (favorite sandwich).
After you finished your midnight snack, you headed upstairs to do your nightly routine.
When you walked into your room and turned on a lamp, you were exhausted. The couch did not make a very good bed.
You collapsed onto your bed (which felt like a cloud at the moment) and fell asleep almost immediately.
You felt yourself being shaken a while later. It was still dark out, so you hadn't slept long.
You assumed it was just your brother, and swatted at the person shaking you.
"Well, that's rude," a familiar voice huffed. And it wasn't your brother.
You sat up and rubbed your bleary eyes.
"Wha?" you spoke through a wide yawn.
"Wakey wakey, (Name)!" through your sleep-blurred vision, you could make out a figure in the dark. You blinked repeatedly until your vision was clearer.
It was hard to see in the dark, but you could see it was male and clad in dark clothing.
"What the fuck?" you muttered, your tired brain not grasping the possible severity of the situation.
"Oh, yeah... You WOULDN'T recognize me! You haven't seen my new style yet," the person said. Why couldn't you place the voice?!
"Well? Who are you then?" you were very annoyed and starting to realize what this might mean for you.
"Aww, I thought you'd recognize my voice! It's me, Jack!"
"What?"
Jack appeared to slump. That's when you noticed something weird about his face.
"Are you wearing a mask?" you asked, even though the answer was obvious.
"Duh! What, you think my face is ACTUALLY blue?" Jack snickered.
"How are you talking through the mask? It's covering your mouth," you said, trying to keep calm. "Why are you in my house, anyway?"
Why hadn't you asked that question first?
"Well, I can talk because this mask is actually very easy to talk through. It doesn't restrict my mouth all that much. And I wanted to show you my new look, but I couldn't wait until Monday! I wanted to show you now!" Jack explained.
"So you snuck into my house in the middle of the night to show me a new mask. You are bat shit crazy," you sighed.
"Oh, it's not just a new mask! It's a whole new me! Wanna see?"
"Sure."
Big mistake.
Jack lifted his mask.
"Turn on the light."
You turned on the bedside lamp, and stifled a scream.
Jack's face... It wasn't even his face anymore.
His skin was the exact color of charcoal, except for his lips and around his eyes, which were a dark blue-grey. He was grinning, showing sharp fangs. But his eyes...
They were gone. His eye sockets were empty, and seemed to be leaking a dark fluid- too dark to be blood.
"J-Jack... What happened to you?" you stuttered out, horrified.
"A little fight. A little deal. And a whole new me!" Jack's grin widened.
"A deal?"
"Yep!"
"W-with who?"
"I'm not at liberty to discuss that."
You were shaking and feeling very light headed.
"Aww, don't be too scared. I'm fine!"
"N-no you're not! How would you call this "fine"? This isn't "fine", Jack. You're eyeless! You aren't human anymore!"
"Psh, of COURSE I'm fine. You always said you liked seeing me happy. Well, now I'm EXSTATIC," Jack placed a hand on your shoulder.
"Is there any point to you being like this?"
"Yes. The sharp teeth and unusual appearance scare people so they're still so I can take some things I need."
"Things?"
"Organs, (Name), organs. Kidneys especially. I've developed a taste for them."
You felt your brain go numb.
"O-organs..."
"Yep!"
You were utterly silent, trying to process this information.
"Aww, you scared?" Jack put his arm around you, grinning widely.
You nodded.
"Good. Because you're alone now."
"What are you talking about? My brother's right down the hall," you gave a light, slightly hysteric laugh.
Jack's smile turned sympathetic.
"No, (Name), I'm afraid you're alone now, except for me."
You were silent and jumped out of his grasp, standing up and staring at him, disbelieving.
"Y-you didn't... You killed him?" you choked out.
"(Name), I had too! You would have screamed and he would have beaten the shit out of me. It was for the best," he said, standing and hugging you.
You shoved him off.
You were alone. In a relatively remote house. With a cannibalistic psycho who had just killed your brother.
"How long?" you asked.
"One week."
"How many?"
"Oh, I lost count. Not all of them died, you know. You CAN survive with only one kidney."
His voice was so light. So uncaring.
"Y-you crazy bastard..." You whispered as tears began to flow from your eyes.
"Now now, (Name) don't cry," Jack murmured.
"Y-you killed him... You killed him..." You sounded like a broken record.
"Don't be so sad, (Name)," Jack whispered, placing his fingers under your chin and lifting your head up.
"Why shouldn't I cry?" you choked, shoving him away again and feeling dizzy.
Jack noticed.
He held you against him and grinned into your hair.
"You're mine now."

You see, I have a theory that EJ made a deal with the devil after having a pretty bad home life.

This is NOT how I imagine Eyeless Jack acts, but I think he's still accepting and getting used to being like this.

That's how he became like this.

There will be more of these! XD More Eyeless Jack stuff.

And there are some Splendy things to come.

EJ- his owner

You- EJ

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GrystinaTheKiller Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2017  Professional Interface Designer
*beats the sh!t out of him, then kicks his area*
E.J: O-ow wh-what was that f-for?
Me: for killing my brother and-*turns to her dragon form*-I am not a human. *flies to slender*
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ThatGothKidXD Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2016
Idk why but to me EJ sounds like a white girl (Sorry if I affended anyone)(idk if I spelled that right XD)
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StrawberryBunnieBoo Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2015
i love this! wish it was a continued story
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XDragonxRebelX Featured By Owner Edited Jun 2, 2015  Student Traditional Artist
Love the bottom XD

Ej belongs to Owner
You belong to Ej

Brilliant
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Akakyoak Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
I know its so original right? *slapped* Oooooh I'm glad someone noticed it XD
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XDragonxRebelX Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2015  Student Traditional Artist
XD
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noname00742 Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
i have the stranges feeling that if that was me. id probably be.. hmm I don't know.. DEAD
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Akakyoak Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
Continuity holds no water in fanfics. Yeah, I guess the reader is dead soon after this story.
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fire2537 Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Please please please make another one of these!
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:iconakakyoak:
Akakyoak Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
I'm working on it! Still wondering if I should make it a lemon
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newerher3 Featured By Owner May 13, 2015
Lemon is good Giggle Love Heart 
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Akakyoak Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
It's currently in the making.
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YukiOokami1212 Featured By Owner May 16, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Is there another chapter?!?!?!?!?!??
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:iconakakyoak:
Akakyoak Featured By Owner May 17, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
No, but I can make another.
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YukiOokami1212 Featured By Owner May 18, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Okay, cool.
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Zyra01 Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2014
OMFZ loooove it <3 <3 faved <3 <3
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Akakyoak Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Yay! Thank you!
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Zyra01 Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2014
\('3')/ welcome :3 <3
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cheesemlp Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2014
I love this story !!!! Can't wait to see more :)
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Akakyoak Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Believe me, there WILL be more.I have a hundred and one ideas. Just wait and see! :)
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cheesemlp Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2014
Yea can't wait!! :)
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Christianthecat Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2014  Student Artist

I'd stay with jack, just... first I would have to make him PROMIS HIS HEAD OFF to not eat my kidneys or oragns! and second I would have to become a creepypasta, hmm... first off I must go kill someone.. then I must confront slendy till he makes me a creepypasta, or I can make slendy uncomfortable by doing this:

Me: Slendy~Chan.... Plz make me a creepypasta~!

Slendy: No.

Me: PLZZZ SLENDY~CHAAAN!

Slendy: No

Me: SLENDDDYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!! *Grabs knife* I will personally show you i'm perfectly capable to be a creepypasta, and if you don't make me one right now i'll cut you into pieces and feed ya' to Smiles!

Slendy: .... Fine.

Me: SQUEEEEEEE!

Jack: Slenderman don't do it! Don't do anything to my angel! No!

Me: *Puts hand over jacks mouth* Tsk tsk! Don't act that way, if I didn't become a creepypasta i'd just me some murderer! Pfft~! Now be a good eyeless jack and SIT DOWN AND SHUT UP AND LET SLENDY DO HIS WORK! Hmf~!

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xoxMOONDUSTxox Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yes exactly what I'd do just probably just annoy slender and be all slendy slendy slendy pweaaaasse and do that until he's like fine
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Akakyoak Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2014  Hobbyist Artist

Jack: Ugh fine.

Slendy: Let me do my damn work!

((I'm not good that this. I'm sorry.))

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Christianthecat Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2014  Student Artist
(You are completely forgiven! *Bowz to thee*)
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Kityluv Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
NYEGH I DUN WANT MY ORGANS STOLEN ;3;
or virginity perhaps? o.o
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Akakyoak Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2014  Hobbyist Artist

Well... Either.

Virginity is more likely in this story! XD

*throws kidney at Eyeless Jack so that he doesn't steal anything from you*

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Kityluv Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Nuuuuuuu -runs away-
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BJthekiller Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
stuff like that turn me on. buuut HE KILLED MY BROTHER! NORMAL MONSTERS/KILLERS cover peoples mouths. Jack you could have covered my mouth to keep me quiet!!! ya crazy bastard. 



awesome story.! it was great
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Akakyoak Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
THANK YOOOU!Well it's not like he wanted to kill YOU... But one wrong move and he's off to the mental institution. So it was just as a precaution.
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Delyandir Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2013  Hobbyist
It was slightly OC by his ''over-acting'' otherwise I think it was a very good story^^ I would think he really got exited by his new self and by telling a friend. Maybe make him a more silent person?...I liked it at least, more to come? :3
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Akakyoak Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2013  Hobbyist Artist

Well yeah... Like I said, I don't think he actually acts like this. I see him as more quiet "not-speaking-unless-I-absolutely-have-too" kind of person. I'm planning on making another Eyeless Jack where he's more himself. Scratch that- I'm making a lot more EJ stories.

One might be a sort of sequel to this.

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Delyandir Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2013  Hobbyist
Awesome! :D I will only need to wait and see :3

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